2023 Moon Viewing Haiku Contest Results

By Michael Dylan Welch

Moon Viewing Event 2023

Judged on Friday, September 1st by David Berger and Michael Dylan Welch . Judged on Saturday, September 2nd by Terran Campbell and Michael Dylan Welch 

  • Friday submission: 88 

  • Saturday submission: 105 

  • Total submission: 193

Saturday, September 2, 2023 

First Place 

too bright 

for eyes to receive 

the hole in the darkness 

Nigel Wylie 

 

Second Place 

the flute’s song trills 

across the water before me— 

can the moon hear it? 

Barbara Segal 

 

Third Place 

a twinge of pain— 

my body imperfect as 

the waning gibbous 

Meghan Sinoff 

Honorable Mentions 

(in alphabetical order by last name) 

 

an imagined moon 

phases unseen still matter 

the glow behind trees 

Megan Benoy 

 

the face of the moon 

language once again 

at our foolishness 

Kim Buehlman 

 

like falling leaves, koi rise up 

to kiss the rippling face 

of the autumn moon 

Carmen Edwards 

 

the moon rises 

late to the party 

holiday weekend vacation 

James Gibson 

 

breath through bamboo 

points to the shining moon— 

a branch snaps 

Matthew Grohne 

 

I look for the moon 

in the darkening eastern sky, 

hoping for a glint 

Hazel Hahn 

 

moon viewing, they said 

but not a sliver of light 

only hungry stars 

Dan Oestreich 

 

the moon’s light 

a night in September 

could only be compared to you 

Rachel Vaney 

 

life is sweet 

feet in grass, moon out 

just relax and nap 

Andy Weinstein 

 

moon and lanterns glow— 

sweet music fills the air tonight 

Hello September! 

Emerita Wheeling 

 

summer ends 

cool breeze at night 

the moon greets us 

Ellen Wijisman 

 

Friday, September 1, 2023 

First Place 

this moon, as easy 

to view from anywhere else— 

and yet here we are 

Grace Wallis 

 

Second Place 

awake before the dew 

moonlight shows me all 

but your face 

Pat Atadero 

 

Third Place 

the sun set— 

the bird sings 

to remember tonight 

Sherry Tang 

 

Honorable Mentions 

(in alphabetical order by last name) 

 

the sun has set 

    do I shiver from the chill 

        or the shakuhachi? 

Joyce Atadero 

 

moon lights pale blue sky 

still conifers listening 

a flute plays softly 

Kathleen Fujino Allison 

 

surrounded by a wall of green 

the still pond reflects 

moon lantern glow 

Valicia Boschek 

 

when I go home, 

the moon goes with me 

and my shadow follows 

Bob Brown 

 

a rabbit above 

two lovers in the moonlight 

the night is warm 

Julia Fox 

 

dragonfly circles 

my friend things about butt cheeks 

the full moon rises 

Maria Kute 

 

crystal moon beams 

light my steps 

guiding me home 

Amber Mersino 

 

what do you know, moon? 

the future? the past? right now? 

I curl back to sleep 

Rebecca Noran 

 

tea ceremony— 

small round cake 

calls to the moon 

Paul Pietromonaco 

 

awaiting my wish 

a coin in the pond 

shines from above! 

Bez Palmer 

 

show me the way home 

a lantern in the night sky 

my silent lover 

John Reese 

 

clouds pass the full moon— 

wind blows the leaves off the willow 

the water shivers 

Johnny Xue